NVMe disks on newer laptops with intel chipset may need a newer version of HDClone, because they use a new method of accessing the NVMes which is not compatible with what was available when HDClone 10 was released.
Download the Free Edition of HDClone (
https://www.miray-software.com/download/hdclone.html) and create a bootable disk for that version and see if the newest version will correctly detect the NVMe.